User:Cohenek/Fredegund/Rhoward02 Peer Review

The first two paragraphs under the Queen section are about her time as a servant before becoming Queen. Perhaps these two paragraphs could be expanded on and made into their own section before talking about her time as Queen. It is very interesting to see her rise to queen through suspected less than moral means and it would be interesting to see more information about it. Later on in the Queen section it is briefly mentioned that Fredegund was widowed, I assume prior to her marriage to King Chiliperic, if there is more information about this previous husband and her relationship to him it might be good to elaborate more on, perhaps there was more suspected foul play?

You talk about the question of her portrayal and reputation and it might be interesting to add if there was any metric of her public opinion that you can find. I always find it interesting to see some how history views certain people as tyrants to the world while the people who they ruled loved them. Overall I find this article very interesting and her life sounds worth researching.

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Charles Ohenek


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 * User:Cohenek/Fredegund


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 * Fredegund