User:Cole Trinter/Seston/Will282848 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ColeTrinter Sean Swindle


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cole Trinter/Seston


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Seston

Evaluate the drafted changes
I saw your sources listed at the bottom of the sandbox but I could not find a bibliography with them added. My first recommendation would be to add a bibliography with these sources if it has not been created. I though that you guys did a great job of expanding upon the small amount of information in the original article. In terms of the lead, I thought you guys did an excellent job of both introducing the main idea and giving examples of Seston occurring in various environments. I thought the content was also well delivered as bias is not present even with controversial issues involving lake Okeechobee. In terms of sources, I thought improvement could be made by adding in text citations when appropriate. I though the organization of your entry was also done well and I believe the direction of the article is clear and concise. Overall great work!