User:Coleencompton/Autism Spectrum/K.sil13 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Coleen - Autism Spectrum
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Autism spectrum

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yes
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Yes

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes, the content is relevant to the article about Autism Spectrum
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? There are vast amounts of information provided on this topic. It is a wonderful resource and I believe it would offer a good understanding to someone who is searching the internet for more information about Autism.  I do not see any information that does not belong or information that is missing.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes, the content added was neutral and not biased
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes
 * Are the sources current? Yes
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? I did not find any grammar issues
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes, the content was very informative and offered wonderful information to users researching the topic of Autism
 * What are the strengths of the content added? I enjoyed the information added about bullying. This aspect of Autism (or any disorder) is not usually talked about often and I believe it is very important to bring to the forefront!! Wonderful contribution idea.
 * How can the content added be improved? I do not see any improvements that need to be added.