User:Colemancaden/sandbox

Articles
===Article: "Generation Z" ===

Evaluating Content
- The content of the article "Generation Z" is generally speaking knowledgeable and informal to the topic. Though the article states multiple times that there is "little consensus" for info. Sometimes

to avoid these holes with no info they overgeneralize. They use the terms "widely credited" and "several persons".

Evaluating Tone
- The article's tone, when evaluated, was the biggest issue with the work itself. They covered all the basic grounds of info but weighed too heavily in the negatives of Generation Z. They also didn't

truly dive into how we compare and contrast to other generations.

Evaluating Sources
- There are many works that were put down as sources for the article. It seems by analyzing the article and sources that majority of the sources are credible. The sources were mainly used to quote

notable people's thoughts and idea of Generation Z. Very few of the sources were actually statistical data and studies.

Evaluating The Article's Talk Page
- The comments in the talk page mainly are critical towards biased facts and poorly credited facts from sources. Looking back on the article, the comment's criticisms are correct in their judgement.

===Article: "Social Media Advertising" ===

Evaluation
- I plan on adding more sources and more examples of social media advertising to the article. I would like to further dive into the social media marketing side of the article and provides more

examples than just Facebook. I also plan on ridding the article of any subjective adjectives. I chose to work on these aspects of the essay because they help the reader gain a better

understanding on social media advertising and it's broad but important role in every day life.

Draft
The "buy button", which can be traced back to system being patented by Amazon in 1997, plays not only a circumstantial part in internet sales but internet life. Even though the realm of social media advertising can be used for sales, it can be for more than just that. For example, social media played a significant role in the 2008 presidential race. Videos that involved both Obama and McCain were able to garner 1.45 billion views. Some of those views and videos could have wavered one's voting decision. Social media advertising also play a huge role in a brands or company's reputation and reception. The way a company presents itself can determine it's popularity and audience. This tactic is even proven in some studies to be played out on a global scale.

The "buy button", which can be traced back to the system being patented by Amazon in 1997, plays not only a circumstantial part in internet sales but internet life. Even though the realm of social media advertising can be used for sales, it can be for more than just that. For example, social media played a significant role in the 2008 presidential race. Videos that involved both Obama and McCain were able to garner 1.45 billion views. Some of those views and videos could have wavered one's voting decision. Social media advertising also plays a huge role in a brand's or company's reputation and reception. The way a company presents itself can determine it's popularity and audience. This tactic is even proven in some studies to be played out on a global scale.