User:Coleopterad/Goliathus albosignatus/PolymorphomyiaTridentata Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Coleopterad


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Coleopterad/Goliathus_albosignatus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Goliathus albosignatus

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

Good! I would make "beetles" singular for the first sentence.

-> "One of several species" is a little better flowing

Description:
Millimeters? Millimetres? maybe change to mm lol

"go" is a little casual tone for describing the bands, maybe say "stretch"? or something similar

-> "Sexually dimorphic traits"

Biology:
What protein do they feed on as larvae? Also, you have [5] cited twice on one of the sentences.

Taxonomy:

Nice map and tree!

Can you list a source for the phylogeny?

Also, sources for the subspecies distributions and sizes?