User:Colettemort/Aerotaxis/Givingthedeeds Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

colettemort


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Aerotaxis



Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I came away from this article with a general understanding of aerotaxis. I would argue this whole section was the lead, and it provide a decent description of the concept. A visual of the process would have aided the text in a rounded understanding. I think that including other sections in the article would provide more depth to the information. The information pulled were strong sources and reliable; there was a variety of newer information coupled with standing information. I feel this was a good start to the article and further development can make this a strong article.