User:Colettemort/Aerotaxis/JakeTayon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Colettemort


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Colettemort/Aerotaxis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead:
The lead has been updated and includes a concise introductory sentence. It does not have a brief description of the major sections. The lead is concise.

Content:
The content is relevant and up-to-date. There is not a description as to what "bands" are. "Energy taxis" was also mentioned but was not explained. This topic addresses microbiology which is underrepresented on Wikipedia.

Tone and Balance:
The content is neutral and unbiased with no attempt at persuasion.

Sources and References:
All of the sources are current and representative of the available literature on thee topic. The links do work.

Organization:
The content is easy to read. The only grammatical thing I would change is that the "O" in oxygen was capitalized in one use of the word, and not the other.

Images and Media:
There are no images

Overall:
The article could use some more content, and a layout that is described by the lead, and followed by supporting sub-topics. There is a good use of sources to back up the claims in the article.