User:Colettemort/Aerotaxis/Saimansadiq Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Colettemort


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Aerotaxis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aerotaxis

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this article could use a lead section. This would really help the reader get an idea of what is mentioned in this article instead of directly diving into the content. It would also be beneficial to add more credible sources to this article.