User:Colettemort/Aerotaxis/TriniGonzales Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Colettemort


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Colettemort/Aerotaxis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Definitely a great start for your groups article. I wasn't able to locate an actual article, it would have been nice to see the entire groups progress as a whole rather than individual drafts. That way I could have a better feel for the article. No images have been added, maybe start considering what images you guys will be using. Maybe take into consideration of explaining what the proteins are. (Small brief detail of what their relevance are and their roles are) This allows the reader to know what you're talking about rather than thinking they're just reading some random proteins. (Aer Tsr proteins) References were also great. All were relevant to the work done by Colette and fully functional. Overall, I think it's a great start for your groups project.