User:Collector786/Sarah E. Goode/Alice4104 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Collector786)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Collector786/Sarah E. Goode/Alice4104 Peer Review,


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sarah E. Goode

Evaluate the drafted changes
your draft of the Sara E. goodie article is very thorough. I was able to check the spelling and I would overlook it again to make sure there are no corrections that are needed. there where so more correctional errors when you had inserted your references. There where a few red sections that I had seen that show that you are currently missing information that would correct your references that you currently have.

I did notice that you have information in sections of your Wikipedia, though they are all short. when I look at most Wikipedia's that I read through online they are always thorough but they usually consist of a life, work and references. I would entail that you should indefinitely keep every section that you do currently have but try not to add to many sections or it may seem too long. I have seen people make Wikipedia's that did have length but they only had a bit of length in those three main sections where each one had concise information that was useful and too the point. The section where it says the invention of the folding bed has a lot of good and concise information that has relation to the woman that you are studying but the section above is more concise and small. As well as the one below it. What I would do is make sure that you check each section and the sentences you have in each one. That way you are being concise and still checking that all of your content is still relatable to whom you are studying.

Peer Review Response
Thank you for taking the time to read through my article and make some suggestions! I will continue editing and will look into the reference section to see what needs correcting. It's hard to decide which information should stay and which isn't necessary as I always am tempted to preserve any fact I find. But the challenge of pairing down is always needed!