User:Colleen.mcdonald003/sandbox

My final draft:

Uses of Creative Writing
Creative writing is used as a hobby, a class, and additionally, to help people with mental disorders. There is history of helping people with mental illness through these creative writing forms. This kind of writing allows the writer to express themselves. People are able to find support in the people around them in their creative writing groups. Taken that the effects of creative writing can be so beneficial to health, an introduction of this into the lives of every day people can improve their day to day basis.

'''Creative writing is used as a hobby, a class, and additionally, to help people with mental disorders. There is history of helping people with mental illness through these creative writing forms.''' This kind of writing allows the writer to express themselves. '''People are able to find support in the people around them in their creative writing groups. Taken that the effects of creative writing can be so beneficial to health, an introduction of this into the lives of every day people may improve their day to day basis.'''

this is going in between the in academia and in the classroom sections

https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/pdfdirect/10.1111/j.1447-0349.2012.00891.x health benefits of creative writing

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1877042811021690[2]


 * "Such data may help to inform policy and design of health recovery programs associated with Creative Writing workshops both in the college or university setting as well as the community health unit."

https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/pdfdirect/10.1111/bjc.12149[3]


 * Find places in wiki article that your info fits and try to incorporate it using similar language
 * Avoid opinions, only write fact and try to paraphrase essentially
 * actually cite your sources :)
 * try your best <3

Review from Mandy and Radhika
The tone of the writing seems like it is for an essay or article. Try to not include questions or your opinion in the writing and state the information as facts. Also, make sure you are adding the citations within your text appropriately. The sources do seem reliable and trustworthy. Lastly, try to double check the placement of your addition, we were thinking that your addition could possibly work in the introduction.