User:Colleena16/sandbox

Article Evaluation for History of Geometry:
 * The first line where they give the Greek origin of the word should be cited. I doubt they know that on their own.
 * As I keep reading, I'm pretty sure every single line needs a citation. None of this is opinion and there's no way this person knew it on their own.
 * There needs to be a comma after The Elements because it's an appositive
 * Okay I just searched for links to The Elements and not one of them was a book by Euclid so that's an issue; update: never mind this comment
 * Third paragraph, first sentence, no comma before 'and' is needed because an independent clause does not come after it
 * RUN ON SENTENCES

Article Evaluation for Mindset:
 * Glad someone said what I was thinking on the first sentence, but it should have been carried through on the rest of the article. Lots of missing citations.
 * "prevalent in both the U.S. and USSR" needs to be set off in commas, not just one comma after
 * The entire Collective Mindsets section is missing citations; okay not actually but they aren't wikicitations so it's confusing