User:Colleenlu/Schinia pulchripennis/Elizlilyd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Colleenlu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Colleenlu/Schinia_pulchripennis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Schinia pulchripennis

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:


 * the lead is the same as the current version
 * as you are expanded on the insect development, the wingspan and feeding facts in the lead could be moved to another subsection

Content:


 * the content added is relevant to the insect

Tone and Balance:


 * the tone is neutral

Sources and References:


 * the added content is cited correctly
 * consider adding more sources (there are only 3 total references)
 * consider linking to other wikipedia articles (ex. link to pages of Orthocarpus pupurascens and Helicoverpa)

Organization:


 * the added content is all listed under the development subsection
 * consider splitting the content into additional subsections (ex. larvae stage, pupae stage, adult stage)

Images and Media:


 * the original article has one image