User:Colleenmcaloon/Methylidynetricobaltnonacarbonyl/Spqr mc Peer Review

General info
Colleen McAloon, or Colleenmcaloon as the username
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Colleenmcaloon/Methylidynetricobaltnonacarbonyl
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The Lead has been updated with the new content; it has a clear and concise introduction that describes the article's topic, but it does not describe briefly the major parts of this article are.

The content is exhaustive and relevant to the topic of the article; it is up-to-date, and there is no content that does not have any relationship with the main topic. While staying neutral, it gives a concise description of the molecule and the history of the discoveries of its properties and reactivities. No persuasion or argument on one side's favor was observed.

The sources are well-covered, up-to-date, and informative. All of the sources are from published journals that have been through peer reviews.

The article is organized logically and nicely, beginning from the discovery of the molecule, its structure and properties, and to reactivities.

The images are visually-appealing. All of the images have captions. However, some of the images, such as the HOMO and LUMO diagrams are not cited - we should not include one's own research on Wikipedia page according to Wiki's rule. Unless cited, these should be included in the in-person presentation instead of on Wikipedia. Again, the DFT analysis part does not have citation and should not be included here.

The article presents a piece of knowledge that is definitely notable! But it should have included links to other wikipedia articles to be more discoverable.

I would also include more Chem Draws of the starting materials, reaction conditions, and the products formed, so that it makes the article easier to understand for the non-professional readers.