User:Colorsdontrun/sandbox

I love being bold!!
access to my critiqued article (The Walking Dead TV Series) is restricted, so I am choosing to critique the Playboi Carti article instead.

I made the first change, adding the information on the music video because it is a song in collaboration with another large artist that helped him chart. I had difficulty finding a source that backed that conclusion. I followed the format of the sentences before. Standalone information that is relevant but difficult to make a coherent paragraph for fear of lacking objectivity.

I added the second sentence right after because the format of the Career section is chronological and there is no section detailing his work. Carti's only official release happened in April of this year. Predictions and rumors are a big part of the hip hop world, including collaborative mixtapes. This would be good for his career and ties in to the multiple Lil Uzi references earlier in the Career section, including my own.