User:Coltonjohnson2/California Wild and Scenic Rivers Act/Gabriellagp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Coltonjohnson2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Coltonjohnson2/California_Wild_and_Scenic_Rivers_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Coltonjohnson2/California_Wild_and_Scenic_Rivers_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * For your lead section (California Wild and Scenic River Act), I would suggest linking a Wikipedia page or an external cite for the National Wild and Scenic Rivers Act
 * I like how you noted how it was inspired as well as its purpose in your first sentences

Content


 * Maybe you could find a bit more history/background on the act itself and then in a separate section you could do “Comparing and Contrasting the National and California Wild and Scenic Rivers Act”

Tone and Balance


 * Remained very neutral throughout the article. No biased or opinions of the writer present.

Sources and References


 * Good amount of sources so far, didn't rely on just one or two sites

Organization


 * Writing is concise
 * Good flow/order of the sections

Images and Media


 * No images or media as of yet. Images of a few different rivers might work

Overall Impressions


 * Well written and informative
 * Minimal grammatical errors/typos
 * Liked the addition of the table of rivers

Maybe add some background and statistics of California’s rivers “California has approximately 189,454 miles of river, of which 1,999.6 miles are designated as wild and scenic - 1% of the state’s river miles” (I got this from the National Wild and Scenic Rivers System https://www.rivers.gov/california.php )

I might suggest discussing drought in California and maybe if this act/authorizing environment has any sort of water management set in place