User:Commsstudent/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Article title
Glossier

Article Evaluation
This article does not yet exist and should be a sub page or a page that links to Emily Weiss's Wiki page. It is currently a section on Emily Weiss' (the creator) page but it should have a focus on the brand itself. The page on Emily Weiss also needs updating as it isn't fully accurate nor is it about Weiss' life outside of her career.

Article title
Anthropologie

Article Evaluation
This article is not written in a neutral standpoint, it is angled like an advertisement for the brand. It focusses too much on the company that owns the brand rather than the company itself. The article needs to be updated with neutral sources and information about the store Anthropologie along with edits on the grammar in much of the writing so it is clearer. Some of the description of the company is almost the same as the brand's website.