User:ComputerGuyAW/Information technology/Simay Memisoglu Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) ComputerGuyAW


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Information technology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Information technology

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The article attains a well-developed lead section and a precise lead introductory sentence, Links to the sites and citations are included for every word that may produce conflict under the information technology branch. There is also pictures that show computer logic board, the Antikythera mechanism, which is considered the first mechanical analog computer, dating back to the first century BC,. The Zuse Z3 is the first programmable computer and a program in paper tape etc. All this informations also very helpful to person who does not have any idea or more information about computer and information technology. I would like to write about IT history under the history title for this sentence : "Humans have been storing, retrieving, manipulating, and communicating information since the Sumerians in Mesopotamia developed writing in about 3000 BC. However, the term information technology in its modern sense first appeared in a 1958 article published in the Harvard Business Review; authors Harold J. Leavitt and Thomas L. Whisler commented that "the new technology does not yet have a single established name. We shall call it information technology (IT)." Their definition consists of three categories: techniques for processing, the application of statistical and mathematical methods to decision-making, and the simulation of higher-order thinking through computer programs". All links and citations work very well and help you to have an idea about the article and even for the sentence because there is a citations and links after almost every sentence which has the story about IT. Overally, I would say you did a really great editing even I cannot find any reason to write about. I think the it was perfectly splendid. Good job!...