User:Conlanlily/Fast fashion/Zeallous124 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Fast fashion Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall this wiki has a lot that requires editing. Although there are over 100 references and there is fact based information inside of the wiki, there is a lot of this that is written like a story. The page seems excessive for the content and could probably use some serious trimming back of the loose writing and hone it down to the factual based information. It would make the page more readable.