User:Connor Aiken/Dragons in Greek mythology/IvoryTrees Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Connor Aiken


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Connor%20Aiken/Dragons_in_Greek_mythology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dragons in Greek mythology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Conner, overall the start to your draft is great. You have a clear understanding of what should be expected. You have a great lead into this topic and you started the first sentence with a great eye catcher. The lead could use a more specific topic and should include what you will be talking about further into this article. The content is up to date and already has a few citations which is great. I also see that you have at least 3-4 sources backing up your information and showing where this information is coming from all while also having a few sub titles showing where your specific topics will be and is very organized. This is a very interesting topic so images would add a great detail to this article and I would love to see those added in. Although this is just a rough draft, so I do not have too many questions the only thing I would like to see are some images and more information in the lead.