User:Connor mccaskey/Muriel Petioni/Madelineknisley Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Connor mccaskey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Muriel Petioni
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looking at this article, I think adding a couple images related to this person or what she did in her life would help bring it to the next level. The layout of information and order in which her life is talked about looks good and effective. The in-text citations and references are well organized from what I can tell! I would maybe expand more on her later life as we continue to add on to these articles just to fully describe her and what she did after her major accomplishments.