User:Connorcwa/Digital economy/Paige5678 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

connorcwa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Connorcwa/Digital economy
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Digital economy
 * Digital economy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)Connor,

I think you have a great start to some basics on digital economy. The section you've chosen to edit is definitely one that is of high importance, especially in today's age, and I think it's a great idea to highlight more about it and add more information. I think your writing could flow a little bit better together throughout what you've written. It just sounds a little bit choppy to me at this point. I would also go a little bit deeper into how the blockchain is affecting the things that surround it - the economy, how people buy things, even tying it into the current buzz around NFT's could be good. I feel like this section could dive a lot deeper into how cryptocurrency is being used and the affect it has. You have a great start! I look forward to reading more of your edits.

~paige

Hey Paige, I appreciate your comments and I will work on making it deeper and will possibly include NFTs like you suggested! Thanks, ~