User:Connorhs25/Hōei eruption/Ezanaa.yo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Connorhs25


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Connorhs25/Hōei_eruption?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hōei eruption

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead of this proposed article change includes detailed information on the article's overall topic while also providing a brief description of what the article is about itself. With an introductory sentence, the lead also made sure to add new content into the article.

Content

The content is completely relevant to the topic and up-to-date. There does not seem to be any generally relevant information that seems to be missing. The article does not target any of wikipedia's equity gaps or address topics aimed towards historically underrepresented groups. Little more specific information such as describing how events began would be helpful.

Tone and balance

All information added is neutral and objective. Because of this there are no points being made that are trying to influence the reader's viewpoint on a specific subject and the information does not make any claims towards a certain position.

Sources and references

The article is well-referenced and uses proper in-text citations as well as a well-listed references list. All the sources and their information that were referenced are highly relevant to the subject matter. All sources seem to be up-to-date and reliable.

Organization

The content in this article has no grammar or spelling errors. It is well organized and easy to read. The sub-headings are clearly labelled and let the ready know what they are currently reading about.

Images and media

No images in this article

Overall impressions

All in all this is a very good start to an article. Strong facts and events are consistently being brought up to inform and engage the reader. As long as relevant content keeps being added into this article it will turn out great.

Relevant pictures and images would serve to make this article much better.