User:Connorp71/Chris Bumstead/Micah.W3 Peer Review

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Connorp71


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 * Editing User:Connorp71/Chris Bumstead/Bibliography - Wikipedia
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I am doing my article evaluation on Connorp71 article of Chris Bumstead. Connor had around five new sources to add new information to the article. He talked about and showed the process of Chris Bumstead preparing for competition as well as the training that he goes through during his of season. He then took a deeper look at the early parts of his life, adding information like sports he played, the university he attended, his stance on working out earlier in his life, earliest inspiration to step on stage.