User:Connorrdickinson3/Yemeni Civil War (2015–present)/Connorrdickinson3 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (C.J. Griffin)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Yemeni Civil War (2015–present)

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?  No it has not.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes it does
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Yes, it takes too long to read.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? There are lengthy parts in the introduction that go into too much detail about logistics and specifics of the war

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? It appears to be highly neutral
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? One could argue it is slightly anti Iranian, but I don't think so.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? It appears to be diverse.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? Not in my opinion.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes all sources seem legitimate .
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes.
 * Are the sources current? Yes.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? None that I see
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Yes
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? Yes
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? Yes

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? Yes it does
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? Extremely large and a big variety of sources.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? Yes.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? Yes.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? It added information to the timeline of the war and specific events.
 * How can the content added be improved? Less subjectivity, more concise and straight forward.

Overall evaluation
The user added to the article by improving and expanding on key events in the Yemeni Civil War, he also added to the source list and edited grammatical errors.