User:Consast/Care work/Mbluek Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Consast


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Consast/Care_work?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you did a really good job on your draft. The information is balanced and covers a broad range of the topic. Sources are thorough, current, and helpful in illustrating the facts of the article draft. Content is easy to read, clear, and organized well. Overall a strong and well done draft. For improvements, maybe expanding more on the Family and Community section to give more background and discuss what happens to care work after the industrial revolution and how it changed?

[Eiko: Karly, you forgot to say HOW Constanza may be able to improve her articles. In addition to identifying the strengths of the content, be sure to discuss how her article could be improved. Thanks!]