User:Contehis/User:Contehis/sandbox/Notmmyrealname Peer Review

Lead
The lead for his article is very descriptive, it holds an easily neutral tone that acts as a subtle for the entire article just to begin with. it describes the general topic of what he Is planning on writing about which Is perfect. it includes all the following. a satisfactory introductory sentence, a concise description, and a brief description of the major sections.

content
The content within this article is very interesting, all of it maintains its relevancy to the topic and keep you focused and interested. the the content added Is indeed up to date, it connects to the most possible current events one could write about on the subject as well as some history of it. there doesn't appear to be any article gaps as all information strings together nicely.

tone, balance, and organization
The tone is this article maintains the guidelines for the wiki neutral post criteria, it simply talks about the facts and Current relevant history of drill rap, Conches strings together all of his points nicely. and balances his article with valid points and information that is sufficient to a satisfactory wikipedia article. its organized as if it is a complete history of drill music as far as I can read.

sources and references
Contehis's does a very good job of referencing and citing his sources thoroughly, the articles cited are relevant to the article.

Overall impressions
This article is very through and has good usage of all previous articles mentioned it describes all points very clearly, sources correctly and has a good tone, it sounds like someone who has a clear interest in drill rap wrote it and it shows.

General info
Contehis
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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