User:Cookiestar123/GDP density/Pumkinsss Peer Review

General info
Cookiestar123
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cookiestar123/GDP density
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):GDP density

Evaluate the drafted changes
lead:

the lead has been updated to present information in a clear and concise manner. it includes a good introductory sentence to the topic as well as the sections that will be later discussed.

content:

the content added is all recent, relevant and sufficient. as well as, the information added is very valuable to the topic.

tone and balance:

the tone of the author is very objective and unbias.

sources and references:

the sources used are very detailed and descriptive. they are both recent and reliable sources. the author extracted important key points from these sources. however, the author could add more sources to the article and cite the sources more frequently.

organization:

the author presented the information in a very clear and understandable way. the article was divided to well-organized sections. the information added is valuable and important which improved the overall quality of the article. the article has no grammatical errors.

images and media:

no images were added.

-the article is not linked to other Wikipedia articles.