User:CoolCollins09/Americanah/Jazzcurry Peer Review

I believe the Lead is in good shape. It is short and sweet, but includes all the major information needed to understand what will further be talked about in the article. The summary, as well, includes a very good amount of information and gives a clear and concise description and understanding for the reader. The character list is detailed and gives brief descriptions about each person, but some could us maybe a sentence or two to further know how they contribute to the book, rather than just knowing her name. In the review section it focuses on the book, but maybe you could add a little review about the movie if you see it necessary. This is about the book, but the show and the movie are both mentioned with little detail about them. I also believe you could add a picture or two, just to get a better visual as to what we are talking about. There are no pictures on the article. Lastly, for the themes of the book, it does touch on race and the discrimination, but i feel as if it could maybe have it's own theme and not thrown in with 'Americanization'

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