User:CoolQuokka/Greek colonisation/BargeWoodland Peer Review

I enjoyed your article. I was curious if this article only covers the Greek colonization before Alexander The Great since that appears to be the only listed section. I think the addition of a map that showed colonized territories would also help to show a visual layer to the scale of how much the Greeks colonized over time, though this may be difficult since you will have to find a free image https://openverse.org/image/eefd767d-9339-4e70-aeda-9c95001bbe8f?q=Greek%20colonization this map could be useful but I know it does not contain all of the areas covered in your list. Perhaps this map could help add a more global view https://openverse.org/image/cd485599-518d-40d1-8c0f-b50062804669?q=Greek%20colonization. Your article might benefit from the citation of a historian discussing the Euboeans to add more legitimacy to the article. If time permits it might be helpful to discuss more the more major or large scale acts of Greek colonization to help add some context as to how the areas were taken and possible motives to sustain Greek hegemony. I apologize if this is already included in the full article on Wikipedia. You are going to do great and hopefully my links are relevant and helpful to you.

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