User:Coolbutterfly/Artaphernes/Bibliography

You will be compiling your bibliography and creating an outline of the changes you will make in this sandbox.

Outline of proposed changes
The sources that I've identified will add more details to the biography section of Artaphernes's Wikipedia page. Herodotus will provide an overview of what Artaphernes was involved in. The books Greece from the Coming of Hellenes and Ancient Persia: A Concise History will give more in depth details.

I would like to add some more details about the siege of Naxos which is why the first source is important. With that source and some details from Herodotus and other books I think it could be better expanded. I also would like to split the first section of the biography in half. There is a description of two different instances of encounters with the Athenians which I think could be made clearer. The first one where Artaphernes encourages the Athenians to give earth and water makes sense but the second one where Hippias goes to the Persians in an attempt to regain power is not super clear. I am going to create another section in order to fix this.

I also would like to add some sources to the Ionian Revolt section. Overall, that section seems fine, it just needs some citations.