User:Cooper0014/News Propaganda/DrCooper9 Peer Review

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Cooper0014


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 * News Propaganda

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Looks like you are making a new article and from what I can see is this is a good start. The lead seems strong, isnt too wordy but gets to the point about the overview of the topic. The headers for the content you have chosen look to be different types of news sources and one thing I am thinking is maybe you have one section and call it something like "News Sources" then the headers you made be sub sections for that one big section. Other than that the sections you made look good as a start but need more information. Looks like each section has one source but you should try to get it to be 2-3 sources per section at least.