User:CooperOfford/Squirrel monkey/FungiFish2020 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cooper Offord


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:CooperOfford/Squirrel monkey
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Squirrel monkey
 * Squirrel monkey

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Peer Review

Your user page for the squirrel monkey is very well organized. The fact that you lay out exactly what you plan to do is exemplary. Your additions to the lead section are solid, especially the fact that you are planning to reincorporate the additions of others to build a stronger opening. The section on reproduction is also very comprehensive. The only thing there that I suggest is to find a ball park number range for the sexual dimorphism. The section on thermoregulation is certainly the most intriguing. The addition of urine washing is an odd behavior that should gain publicity because of your work. The section on osmoregulation is good as well, urine concentrating abilities are a relevant addition. Your additions are well balanced, neutral, and your sources seem reliable. Overall, by tying in information from the course and organizing so well, you not only made good additions but set an example for other students.

--FungiFish2020 (talk) 18:22, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

Reposted from the wrong location, sorry you couldn't see this before.