User:CooperR.Anthony/Youth mentoring/Zr-gpp-1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CooperR. Anthony


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CooperR.Anthony/Youth_mentoring?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Youth mentoring

Evaluate the drafted changes
Cooper added references and elaborated more on the existing article. She provided references for the claims made in her paragraphs. The works cited are recent which can mean the updated edits on the page are up-to date and not information from long time ago. In every step of her draft she provides what she has changed or what her plans are for that section, including her "lead" section introduces to the rest of the article and what to expect. One of the sterenghts is the mention of "paraprofessionals", this is a great addition to the article and emphasises the importance of a holistic approach to youth mentoring and what their role is.

Recommendations: Currently there are no images in the original article, 1-2 could give readers a visual of youth mentoring. Images chosen should not be ones showing the youth as passive and helpless. Second, in her article she mentions "ASP" which is not clarified what "ASP" means in her article or in the original article. I think providing the meaning for the acronym would be useful so people know since it is mentioned often. I don't have background knowledge on this topic so personally confused what it means. Laslty, expanding on the role of paraprofessionals~ maybe providing a case study of where this methos/approach has worked.