User:Corbin Blackett/Donnell Walton/Eric godbout24 Peer Review

General info
Stevenw9909, Oofin245, Shavarb007, Corbin Blackett
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Corbin Blackett/Donnell Walton
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:Corbin Blackett/Donnell Walton

Evaluate the drafted changes
Links to articles and sources work great, Would swap the word "he" for his last name to keep formal and that structure of Wikipedia being a digital Encyclopedia as this would come off more as a personal report than an anonymous neutral source of information. other than that everything is perfect just needs a little more information overall if its available of course