User:Corbin Blackett/Donnell Walton/JoeyFungus Peer Review

General info
Corbin Blackett, Shavarb007, Oofin245, Stevenw9909
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Corbin Blackett/Donnell Walton
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The top part I think is generally well written and put in a good order so it reads nicely.

The early life and education is also very well written although it feels like it may be lacking some information that could be useful.

The career section could use some more work as it only mentions where he worked right after graduation and currently which feels like it may be missing more to his career history.

There isn't anything aside from the awards and honors section inside the personal life section.

Inside the awards and honors section there is only award he was awarded so there is not much in this section either.

All the links and references appear to be in order and working however.

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