User:CoreyCam1/Electronic art/Icruz5 Peer Review

Your paragraph was very informative and it included a good number of sources. However, don't forget to add commas, correct capitalization, and try not to say "art" too much. I would suggest using synonyms so you won't sound repetitive. "during this era company's were really experimenting with not only digital art but audio to go along with the art" I would take out really, you don't need it. I don't know a lot about electronic art or what is already in the article but to add more, you can mention electronic art in today's society, whether or not there are new and improved softwares, etc.