User:Corginelious/Foramen magnum/Amarq030 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Corginelious


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Corginelious/Foramen_magnum?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Foramen magnum

Lead
Lead has been updated to reflect new content, and is not to concise or overly detailed.

Content
The content added is important, I think the part that was needed the most was when its said "Although not fully proven, there are many studies that show the possibility that where the foramen magnum is positioned in the cranium is significant in fossils. By being able to locate where the foramen magnum is positioned, anthropologists and other researchers are able to determine whether or not the species were bipedal (among other factors)." The past article made it unclear that bipedalism and the foramen magnum being related to each other is not proven.

Content added is relevant to the topic, and the content added is up-to-date.

Tone and Balance
Content has great tone and balance. Great work.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:

All new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information, and can not find better sources.

Organization
Content added is concise, clear, and easy to read.

~Allie