User:Cornbenj/Roseburg Oregon National Guard Armory/ChaseSub98 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cornbenj


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cornbenj/Roseburg_Oregon_National_Guard_Armory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Roseburg Oregon National Guard Armory

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This article looks really good. It could do with reducing the number of citations used to only the first, a key middle, or last sentence, rather than having every sentence cited. Your sources seem good and reliable. The only other detail I notice is that the date when it was converted to a community center should be added to its section, rather than left to the end of the previous one.