User:Cornbenj/Roseburg Oregon National Guard Armory/Noah Chandler Shelton Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Benjamin Cornell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cornbenj/Roseburg_Oregon_National_Guard_Armory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Benjamin, your article is definitely on the right track to becoming a well developed Wikipedia page. You have a wealth of citations for the information that you provide, and it all seems very applicable and informative to your topic. Going forward, I would try to clean up some of the minor grammatical and style errors in various sections throughout your piece. For example, you say "The former armory is located at 1034 SE Oak Ave, Roseburg, OR 97470, and situated directly south of the Roseburg Post Office." Just for greater readability, I would omit the word situate to make it read as "The former armory is located at 1034 SE Oak Ave, Roseburg, OR 97470, just south of the Roseburg Post Office." Overall, what I see is mostly stylistic, so I would not be too worried about it! Good job man!