User:Cornishgamehen/Bartender/Ronaldwsh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cornishgamehen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cornishgamehen/Bartender?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bartender

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your draft greatly complements the current article by providing a history of bartending. By breaking down your information geographically, users are able to understand and learn about the history of bartending in different geographical regions, as well as the progression it has made throughout the years.

Your draft is properly-cited, and the content is neutral-toned and useful to the article.