User:Cornyon/Walking/Jpete17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Cornyon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cornyon/Walking


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Walking

Evaluate the drafted changes
The section about the 2007 study might be better as a separate paragraph. The citation could also be more useful earlier in that section, in the sentence where the study is first mentioned.

Good sources.

Wording might be a bit too technical.

Potentially separate the "Origins" section into a new section specifically for the origins of walking in humans?

Jpete17 (talk) 06:35, 24 February 2022 (UTC)