User:CorpusculateAggregation/Nicola Antonio Stigliola/Jtvndw Peer Review

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CorpusculateAggregation article on Nicola Antonio Stigliola
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 * Nicola Antonio Stigliola

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Good understanding of what needs to be improved on the original article, regarding references and information. If you're going to make changes to formatting or grammer, I would recommend copying the original section into your sandbox.

The contents of the article could be organized better, like adding his works to the printing section as well. I saw that the mention of ~80 works was mentioned twice, so that might be repetitive. I do like the multiple sections split up.

Sources seem good with the Cartography text book and the Dizionario Bigrafico. Both links worked and I was able to find them. Try to get more sources, since two is kind of bare minimum- but I understand that it is hard since most of them will be in Italian.

In the lead, there is no mention of his cartography and map-making and since you made a large section that should be added. I don't know if that long quote really provides anything in the lead, so it might need to be changed.