User:CorpusculateAggregation/Nicola Antonio Stigliola/RyanSchrick87 Peer Review

General info
CorpusculateAggregation
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:CorpusculateAggregation/Nicola Antonio Stigliola
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Nicola Antonio Stigliola

Evaluate the drafted changes
The original article is pretty barren at first glance. I think there is a lot of opportunity to add information about his early and late life. How did his upbringing walk him into his career, any more information about his family (parents, any siblings, ect.), and information about his late personal years post prison release (did he retire, did he marry, when and where and how did he die, etc.).

You have a well organized sand box for the information you want to add. I think there are a few more topics you could look into adding like I

mentioned above.

Clearly he kept working after he was released from prison. More information on what he did and how he avoided going back to prison could be a worthwhile addition to your draft.

If images of or pertaining to Nicola Antonio Stiglioa you should add them to the article

You’ve done a great job siting ahead of time and all your citations seem to be working as intended.