User:Corydoney55/Alison ramsdell/Mmine003 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Coreydoney55


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Corydoney55
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Grammatical errors and vocabulary adjustments. Information is accurate and lengthy.