User:Corydoney55/Alison ramsdell/Ncarpenter1805 Peer Review

Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alison Ramsdell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Corydoney55/Alison_ramsdell?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall well done. Spacing of each picture is where it should be for easy flow of vision from the text to said pictures. I know it may seem repetitive, however, I think it would be a little bit more professorial to use her full name "Alison Ramsdell" more often then "Ms. Ramsdell" or just "ramsdell worked". The Early work and occupation portion is very nicely layed out. However, is there any more information you could add to either of these sections to exemplifies how she became interested in becoming a U.S attorney or about how she made it to this opportunity.