User:Cosmo1836/Nadia Bakhurji/Ilovesushilol15 Peer Review

addressGeneral info
Cosmo1836
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cosmo1836/Nadia_Bakhurji?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
lead:

Lead needs work, there is no lead.

content:

content in the first two paragraphs seem somehow unrelated, editor should reorganize their ideas to create a better sequence of ideas

the content added is not up to date since the reference is from an article written in 2007

the article does address topics related to historically underrepresented populations like women in Saudi Arabia

tone:

the content added could be seen as biased (second paragraph)

sources and references:

the links cited work

the content accurately reflects what the source cites

there is only one resource attached.

images and media:

no images or media

organization:

content is well written and easy to read

overall review:

content added did improve the overall quality of the article

the content added adds a historic background to the article and describes the personality of the subject (Nadia) better.