User:Coth02/John of Głogów/PuRan17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Coth02


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Coth02/John_of_G%C5%82og%C3%B3w?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template#Lead
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * John of Głogów

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)