User:Coulisz/Conservation of fungi/ABuescher Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Coulisz "Conservation of Fungi"


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Coulisz/Conservation_of_fungi?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Conservation of fungi

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I would in the beginning change "fragmentation of habitat" to "habitat fragmentation" and I would put the sentence about Cátia Canteiro, after the list of specialist groups. The inclusion of Catina is nice but I feel would be a better addition in the articles About the five different groups instead of in the fungi article. It kind of pulls me out of the article for a brief intermission

I would like to see more inclusion inside the Conservation Strategies section of how these strategies are directly used to help conserve fungi.

I would also like to see a new section that includes specific conservation efforts going on, or if there are none something that says that. I just think that some more effort could be put into current fungus conservation going on. This feels like a page about conservation biology not a page about FUNGUS conservation biology. Add a bit more fungal focus and details and you will be good

Also there are NO PHOTOS. GIVE ME MUSHROOM PICS

Additional source possibility : https://www.ffungi.org/en/conservation