User:Coulisz/Conservation of fungi/TJWinston12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Coulisz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Coulisz/Conservation_of_fungi?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has an introductory sentence that provides detail about the topic at hand. The lead also provides many hyperlinks and references for the article. The article is broken into two main sections being Ecosystem services and Conservation strategies. The content added in both sections is relevant to the topic and up-to-date.

In ecosystem services the section is one main paragraph consisting of hyperlinks and references. The ecosystem services section could be broken down with subcategories like conservation strategies was for more flow.

Conservation strategies is broken into subcategories of red listing, species specific approach, and system approach. The section provides hyperlinks relevant to the topic and has many details.